As a reader, I’m more drawn to stories that challenge and disturb our way of thinking about the “normal” world. There’s just something about examining the aspects of our lives that no one wants to discuss that appeals to me. That being said, my tolerance for what is “too far” in books is pretty high.
My next book selection was Donald Ray Pollock’s Knockemstiff, a collection of short stories about the town of Knockemstiff, Ohio and its colorful (to say the least) characters. And to say that it fits the qualities of a subversive, dark, challenging novel would be an understatement. The stories range from disturbing to strange, presenting a cast of characters that are searching for redemption, revenge, or answers.
Donald Ray Pollock’s Knockemstiff has many of the similar qualities that a large amount of dark novels have, but it lacks what many other books in its genre have: a purpose behind its subversiveness. That’s what is so intriguing about books like American Psycho, Fight Club, A Clockwork Orange, It, etc. Even though these books were tough to read at certain points, there was a reason behind it, a deeper meaning that offered solace or explanation for the reader. American Psycho used violence to inform us of the problem of self-image and consumerism in New York. Fight Club used violence and subversive behavior as a means to find purpose in one’s life and achieve self-enlightenment. Knockemstiff uses all the tools of dark writing to ask questions, but provides no answers or explanation. Now, granted, I understand that an author’s purpose may very well be to present absolutely no answers for the characters’ predicaments. But these stories in Knockemstiff are so heavy-handed and try to push us so far that Pollock’s presentation of this town is less like a reminder to make something of our lives and more of an annoying poke on the shoulder.
Perhaps the difficulty in expecting Pollock to tell us something of importance lies in the fact that this is a collection of short stories. But if we can garner no meaning other than “Bad things will always happen to these characters and they’ll only stay the same or get worse” story after story, there needs to be some work on Pollock’s end.
This is not to say that Pollock is a bad writer. His stories are definitely memorable, and his imagery is exceptional. Having never lived in a town like Knockemstiff, I can get an exact sense of what it’s like to live there. It’s a place where the beer is always warm, the winters are bitter cold, and the summers are suffocating. As a reader, you’re never truly comfortable with any of the stories he’s telling. There’s always something…off, whether it’s the characters or setting. What starts off as “normal” is always uneasy. There are some great stories here, most notably “Real Life” and “Hair’s Fate,” and Pollock succeeds in giving us effective glimpses at everyones’ lives, even for 10-15 pages. Another interesting aspect of this collection is the appearance of previous characters in later stories. I found myself intrigued when I spotted them, but their appearance served no purpose other than, “Hey, the guy that [insert disturbing behavior] a few chapters ago is there.”
You can always expect there to be some sort of violent act story by story, and many characters are either dying or experience death in some regard. As a small critique on Pollock’s writing, while these stories are told by completely different narrators, most of them have the same narrative voice and storytelling structure. My biggest critique, and feel free to dispute this with me, is that there are no redeeming stories here. No feel-good aspects. It is dreary all the time in Knockemstiff, Ohio, and nothing will change. As I said before, I don’t expect a book to always have a happy ending – American Psycho wasn’t exactly an “upper.” But this collection of short stories is like beating a dead horse (which I could believe one of the characters would do). I found myself forcing myself to read the stories and becoming annoyed, because I more or less could guess what would be happening: Set up, insult to self-image, drug use or violence, attempts to improve situation, failure, mostly negative change, end.
Knockemstiff contains well-written stories with fantastic imagery, but similar story structures and obligatory depressing moods. Pollock’s message, articulated throughout the stories, is said best by one of his characters: “It’ll be over soon.” Funny, I was thinking the same thing reading the book.